Submitted by Confuzed (not verified) on Wed, 10/19/2011 - 6:47pm.
This story is confusing. The areas in question follow: "The letter in part said: 'One recent anonymous allegation is particularly troubling in that it alleges that a member of the Leland Police Department pointed a weapon at another member of this department.Our internal review has failed to identify a victim or suspect. I am requesting that your agency investigate this anonymous allegation of criminal conduct. I am also requesting that your agency look into all allegations of criminal conduct by the Leland Police Department.'
We've also learned that within days of Jayne sending the letter, the same officer was taken off the street and required to do more training."
OK, if the review failed to identify a victim or suspect, who is "the SAME officer" required to do more training? Please clarify, WWAY. I understand keeping names confidential, but your writing and reporting is unnecessarily cryptic and unclear.
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This story is confusing. The areas in question follow: "The letter in part said: 'One recent anonymous allegation is particularly troubling in that it alleges that a member of the Leland Police Department pointed a weapon at another member of this department.Our internal review has failed to identify a victim or suspect. I am requesting that your agency investigate this anonymous allegation of criminal conduct. I am also requesting that your agency look into all allegations of criminal conduct by the Leland Police Department.'
We've also learned that within days of Jayne sending the letter, the same officer was taken off the street and required to do more training."
OK, if the review failed to identify a victim or suspect, who is "the SAME officer" required to do more training? Please clarify, WWAY. I understand keeping names confidential, but your writing and reporting is unnecessarily cryptic and unclear.